A few days ago I went for a walk which included passing along the base of the crag where I was teaching climbing for all those years. It was a fine day, but I was the only one around – no one climbing, or even walking. As you do, I began idly looking at different climbs and visualising the moves I would need to climb them. It was then a few lines came to me that might constitute a poem on the subject.
I wandered around slowly, musing, jotting ideas down in my notebook.
Well, surprise, surprise. I now have several finished poems and will probably put them up here later this year as a series – perhaps once the climbing season has started again, and when I’ve decided what to illustrate them with.
But as a bit of a taster, here is the first one.
He steps one foot onto the thin ledge,
Hugging his body close to the rock face,
And slides,
Slowly,
His fingers walking up the wall,
Into balance.
He thrusts a leg out into space
And the watchers gasp.
Is he falling?
They move unconsciously away
From the base of the crag.
But no,
He keeps his balance.
Ah!
Now he reaches up
Up…
Just a little…
Further…
There!
Two fingers hook over
A thin flake of rock
And he scrambles up.
He smiles.
‘It’s all in the technique,’ he calls down.
‘Nothing to do with strength.’
Look forward to these. Yes I still love planning climbing routes. I remember sitting under the Eiger with a cup of coffee trying to plot routes. It was almost carthatic thinking about Hinterstoisser and Kurz.
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But did you try any of them? A serious day out, really.
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No never dropped the coffee. Had a friend who climbed Everest. It was his level, mine was much less demanding.
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Ah, that is serious. I’ve trekked to Everest base camp, but never done the serious stuff.
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In your punch line there, I wasn’t sure if you were talking about climbing…
… or poetry.
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Just muscling my way through another poem, Dave.
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Your words brought to life the action and the mood effectively!
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Thanks, Shail. there will be a short series…
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