Moon
With the click of the door closing,
The laughter and the clink of glasses
Has faded,
Evaporated,
and left…
…nothing.
I face the shadowed lawn,
In tidal grey and scattered silver.
Pulling my collar up, and,
Pushing my hands down,
Deep into my pockets,
I crunch down the driveway
As if crushing ice cubes beneath my feet,
Until I reach the street, long emptied and dark,
And now shuttered.
And stop.
Around me,
A sharp silence swirls
Like my misty breath;
A press of ghosts at an invisible bar.
Then looking up,
Through frosted glasses,
I see a perfect slice of lemon moon
In a cold, gin-clear sky.
And I laugh.
I will be away all next week, but I’ll reply to any comments before then and, of course, when I return.
beautiful Mick…..
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Thank you, Sudhir!
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Sir, the link to my new blog is http://wildtravellers.in/ , hope you have seen that…
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I did see it and I remember now that there was no ‘follow’ button then. I see you have an email subscribe button now, though.
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but you get a follow button after liking a post…..
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I don’t see it, but I have subscribed via email.
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thanks a lot…..
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good one.
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Thanks, Jina.
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you’re welcome.
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Bravo! you shine on poetry front too Mick, apart from writing!
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Thanks, Arv! The moon shines better, though…
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👍
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Beautiful composition Mick!
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Thank you, Divya.
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Great poem! Enjoy your time away!
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Thank you – it’s work, unfortunately.
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Pesky making a living…….gets in the way of fun…..
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Too damn right!
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Very good, Mick! I hope you realize what a good writer you are. And I also hope you are heading off to somewhere fun.
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Thanks, Ann. I still don’t rate my poems much – definitely still learning. And it’s Portugal, which is lovely, but it’s work! Honest!
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This is a really great poem, Mick. Well done!
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Thanks, Robbie.
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Nice one Mick, really liked it especially the slightly manic laugh at the end. Have a good time in Portugal.
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Thanks, Jonno. I hadn’t thought of it as manic, but I see that. Portugal was nice, but the work was tough. Very pleased to be back.
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Mick, you paint with words. I was walking with you 🙂
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That’s lovely, Jacqueline. Thank you!
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You certainly have a way with words – I was there !
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Thanks, Orville. And thanks for visiting and following.
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My Pleasure !
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Oh wow… didn’t know you write poems too! 👍
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Just occasionally, Sushi. I’ve put one or two up on the blog over the last year, but generally I don’t think they’re up to scrutiny.
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They are wonderful mick… i am such a bad poet i get real envious of those who can pen poems so effortlessly 😄
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Oh, hardly effortless, I assure you! But thank you!
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Loved it!!
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Magnificent poem Mick. Felt the coolness of the night, and warmth of the moon.
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Success, then! Thank you!
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