I happened on a notebook of poems I’d written some twenty to twenty five years ago.
My style has changed somewhat in the intervening years, and most of them seem rather poor now. One or two of them I still like, though, and I think I’ll put them up here now and again.
This one is just called Rain.
I hurried down the road before the storm
– this must be six or seven years ago ā
Still silhouettes for trees within the mist,
Around ahead behind me dull and grey.
The air was chilled
And in the hills the thunder growled,
A tiger prowled,
In the high forests of the Weald.
A hundred miles away my cottage refuge,
A forlorn hope now far beyond the deluge.
Sharp blue electric yellow split the air,
A crack like washing harried by the wind.
Then came swollen lazy drops of water,
Beachballs of rain exploding all around.
Dull chattering
The pattering of rain on tiles
After the miles
Iād run through forests of the Weald.
The sound of distant gunfire possibly,
I closed my eyes to see where I might be.
This is marvellous, Mick! Recently Mumsie found some poems I wrote when I was nine. Worth a share, do you think?!
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Only you can be the judge of that, Lucy. I was a little uncertain about posting, as it’s not a poem I would have written now, and I can see lots of faults. I do quite like it, though. Thank you!
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I love the last line š
I like all of it, but the last line is awesome!
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Thanks, Sam! Awesome I like!
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Well it is š
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I think it’s beautiful Mick!
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Thanks, Sue. And thanks for visiting.
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Lovely, Mick. I’m glad you’re sharing these. š
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Thanks, Diana. Not sure I’ll share too many of them, though. Some are very doubtful!
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I likes this kinda poem Mick. Itās lyrically to the point and beautifully memorable, sharp and dedicated.
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Thanks, Jaymz. I’ll have to look hard at the others and see if any of them would fit that description.
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Well worth sharing, thank you!
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Thanks, Ann.
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Beautiful share Mick.
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Thanks, Sumith.
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I really liked the line “around ahead behind me dull and grey.” The spoken resonance sets a great rhythm for this poem.
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Thanks, Gabe. I never was very good at grammar…
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hehehe you grammar are very goodly to me!
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“I closed my eyes to see where I might be”
Love this part
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Thanks, Ishaan.
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